A short story I wrote years ago has found its home. Apu's Homecoming is up at Asia Writes, one of my favourite sites. Do read it and give your honest (yes, brutal will do) feedback. I would really appreciate it.
the story has the twist at the end that characterises a short story. but it is a light story without any higher level human condition issues involved. secondly there is a drift in the story as it starts from the football match and then meanders. these are the technical details and i have mentioned them because you asked for them from a critical point of view. i enjoyed reading the story as an ordinary reader.
i was very much interested on short stories. i have this habit since i have studying my +1 and +2. i dont know how many of you remember about the short stories in English subject.
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Great story love it thanks for sharing.
Definitely a great story for sure:)
the story has the twist at the end that characterises a short story. but it is a light story without any higher level human condition issues involved. secondly there is a drift in the story as it starts from the football match and then meanders.
these are the technical details and i have mentioned them because you asked for them from a critical point of view.
i enjoyed reading the story as an ordinary reader.
Thanks for your feedback, Rahul. I appreciate and even agree with it.
I like it.. keep writing n posting...
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i was very much interested on short stories. i have this habit since i have studying my +1 and +2. i dont know how many of you remember about the short stories in English subject.
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