My learning curve as a writer. It's not just about writing, you know.
Great story love it thanks for sharing.
Definitely a great story for sure:)
the story has the twist at the end that characterises a short story. but it is a light story without any higher level human condition issues involved. secondly there is a drift in the story as it starts from the football match and then meanders. these are the technical details and i have mentioned them because you asked for them from a critical point of view. i enjoyed reading the story as an ordinary reader.
Thanks for your feedback, Rahul. I appreciate and even agree with it.
I like it.. keep writing n posting...http://rajnishonline.blogspot.com/
i was very much interested on short stories. i have this habit since i have studying my +1 and +2. i dont know how many of you remember about the short stories in English subject.
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